Audience Feedback - Rough Cut

The following feedback was in response to my rough cut music video, shown below:

Pros

• "I like the colour editing; the vivid yellow/orange filter effect is quite striking"
• "You've edited your video in time with the music, the cuts match bursts of pace in the song"
• "The devil-guy in the background looks good. His scenes are quite strange. He matches the weirdness of the song."

Cons

• "Perhaps a little more variety is needed. Not enough strangeness. It needs to be more odd."
• "Lip-syncing is a little off at the beginning."
• "Perhaps some unnecessary zoom-out cutting when the priest is singing beside the cross; it doesn't look as effective as the other parts of the song where you've done this effect."

Suggestions

• "I think some form of spanish dancing would go well with this song. Have you thought about adding some form of dance act in your video?" - I agree, and I like this idea. I will certainly look to arrange some form of dance act in my video.